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I really love your Villain Hero medic is missing/captured by Superhero, have you considered writing any more in that verse, hero and villain having to team up to rescue medic is i dynamic i would love to see. Especially with what you’ve already written of their interactions! Obliviously no pressure just love the story and was wondering if you’d ever consider a part 2
Thank you! Yes, I’m going to continue that one. Some day. Hopefully soon.
Hey! Um, would you mind continuing the thief and detective snippet? https://yourheartonfire.tumblr.com/post/679428436875427840/a-continuation-of-the-detective-hero-and-thief (this one jajsj). If you don't want to it's fine, all of ur writings are cool!
Have a nice day!!
Thank you for the kind words! I think that one is complete as a drabble - developing it into a bigger story would be a full book.
Hiyaaaaaa I just wanted to let you know that your drabbles are great and they help me pass the time everyday! Your skills are unmatched and your talent must be natural! I love it and so do many others! Keep up the amazing work!! <3
ALSOOO adding onto what i said prior,
I know technically villain and hero are... Different?? Sort of? But I fucking love how their story is written in the pov of Protag.
Here's Hero, who doesn't want to "burden" Protag with his backstory or his trauma. Even though Hero gives Protag the manila files, yeah, but that's bc he knows the feeling of people having power and he doesn't want to resemble that, no matter how much of a product he is of that.
Then there's the Villain!! And when I tell you, HOLY SHIT the villain is cool as fuck. I really like the way Villain is constantly insisting on how they're the real one. And i absolutely love how it's Villain who's the one who tells Protag about this entire situation of being...split? This is perfectly written "show, not tell". As in, it shows how much struggling and pain the hero had gone thru w his training. Hell, he was stripped from the comfort and love of a family! No wonder he applied for a chance to actually have someone love him, it's something that's been lacking in his life.
This goes back to what I said earlier. Hero doesn't want to burden Protag with his story. He sees it as a negative trait. He's a supposed rule follower, docile for all the power he has. The positive attributes he has isn't just being nice or caring. It's literally him being obedient to the orders being given to him. That's a "good" hero. And all the attributes of such a well renown hero would be the negativity. Villain isn't simply hateful, or filled with malice. These negative traits aren't specifically TO the general public, but TO the government system that had taken him from his family. That had taken him from a possibility of a gentler life.
That's why Villain also keeps saying he's the real one. Because the feeling of hurt and pain was part of Hero and STILL is. I don't really know how to word this part well, but I was also thinking it may be because the Hero being docile to the government was more of a "face" he was required to put for his work. So the true feelings of his anger was pushed down deep, but it was strong. Hero practically had their entire adolescence controlled. They had their entire training controlled and now, their entire life control. However, feelings and emotions are meant to be personal. It's what makes people feel REAL and human. So when Hero's negative feelings, i.e, their REAL feelings manifested into the Villain, Villain ends up seeing himself as the real one.
I'm SO sorry for this essay 😭 and on top of that, the two(?) Paragraphs I sent before. But this is one of my favorite writings on Tumblr and I NEEDED to word vomit to let you know my thoughts w how i interpreted the characters. Please lmk ur own thought process too, I'm v curious!! Let me know if my analyzing was overreaching too, honestly i don't mind lmao. I just love how subtle but easy to piece this series is. (Not pressuring u to continue it btw. Take ur time. I just love how everything was written)
Had to add this gorgeous mini essay from Snowshower. It’s been in my inbox for me to squee over for months!
A much belated thanks!
I'm in love w how you wrote the hero in The Soulmate programme. Just the subtle hint of Hero's personal conflict and need for attention and love- GENUINE attention and love because of the trauma they've gone thru. ESPECIALLY with how Protag doesn't necessarily know the full details (sort of) and Hero themselves is afraid of being alone, almost like a kicked puppy tbh. I just love heroes written like that. I will eat it up anytime and anywhere
I answered this in the Discord, but a thank you here as well! This hero and protagonist are favorites to write.
I sorry... Very stupid and not paying attention to reblogs vs posts.
It looks like the one I was asking for is someone else's. That's what I get for just scrolling through your blog devouring drabble after drabble.
I do particularly enjoy the Set Up with the Hacker and Villain. And I'm really digging the Dead mans switch. There's some character dynamics you've set up that I'm living for.
Before I go hide my shame by continuing to reread a bunch of your stuff to make sure I have read it,
In the Hall of Fame post, are those note counts for the numbers? Cause I was wondering if there was more to the thief x detective. Hopefully with them being very flirty while breaking into vaults together and returning the stolen art.
Again, I do really love your work, I just forget to check usernames on posts.
All good, thx for the kind words! 😁 No continuation on the thief x detective is planned, but I do intend to continue Dead Man’s Switch.
Oh no I’ve been getting notes for MONTHS i havent answered okay incoming clear the inbox answer extravaganza over this weekend.